Something about the story's narrative voice just bores me and I find that it doesn't become as immersive later on into the story. I don't think the problem inherently lies in the 2nd POV, but rather how the voice shows the details in the story. In short, there is A LOT of 'telling' than 'showing'.
I find the lack of actions in between pieces of dialogue troublesome... and blank-ish for the lack of a better word.
Katan as a protagonist... he seems to be quite dichotomic as a character, but I digress.
That doesn't necessarily mean that I don't like the VN. I'he had quite the enjoyable experienc for the most part.
Edit: Actually I find the characterization of Ramos to sometimes not really make sense. At some point, I recall Katan saying that he plans to pawn off the sword his uncle and aunt gave him for money, but when Ramos asked to sell it, he's hesitant all of a sudden.
I also find that he's quite ignorant for a prince. Somehow, he barely knows anything about Farhoron. Isn't he supposed to at least know more about it than stories because he is taught all these sorts of things, otherwise he wouldn't really be a good prince, would he?
There were also some character inconsistencies like when Ramos declined some stuff such as sleeping in Renee's old child's bed because he didn't want to be indebted. I found it weird because he was the same person who didn't hesitate to take the money and find the booze.
There were also some errors in grammar, sometimes. This becomes further evident later into the story. While they aren't to the point that the text no longer becomes understandable, I find them to be a bother to my pedantic self.
Do you mean as on itch.io or just in general because if it's itch then it is still being updated but it takes some time for the game to be updated because of how detailed it is.
I am so into the Koshiro path but was so disappointed when I couldn't run away with him. I really hope that I will he able to pick this option soon. I can't lie, you've made me fall for him.
You are doing a great job with this game it really got my attention I played all three parts just to get a feel of the ending. I like each and every character but my favorite is Ramos. Keep up the fantastic work!!
No idea but I was really disappointed that you don't have any NSFW scene with Leandros. You have with Ramos and Koshiro but not him? And he got a full chapter of update :((((
I haven't played this game in years but Leandros did have one, I guess was removed when they got new artist for these current sprites, odd. their sex scenes was having sex with MC in a hut within some village I think, its been a while lol. their old character art when had the sex scene.
edit: forgot, they also had an even older sprite before this one. bulky like this one here but their face was very detailed more realistic looking lion head with piercing yellow eyes.
Hii there's a seemingly unskippable error when coming across Koshiro's old home. I've seen a few comments about this, but no official response, so I'm just commenting to raise awareness. Using the Android version, if that helps.
I know that you're probably busy but I don't know, after I reach koshiro's village the game crashes saying something like, " image not found"? I have been so hooked reading the route I tried many things like, re-downloading the game like 4 times in a row. I don't know :(
Next build will be a patreon one so it ownt be on itch for a long time and it's also not released on patreon yet. Hiddenwalls updates always take a while but are usually large and of great quallity. If you look at the past dev logs itch updates:
there is a discord link on the top when you open the page it should be a red colour. You will see Patreon and then a few lines down discord will be there.
During koshiros route after you choose to leave the vimage on the Android version there is a massive exception I have hit ignore at least 30 times at this point and it's still occurring
You need to press ignore for around 120 then you'll be taken to a scene. I suggest that you save your progress if you arrived at the scene because if you tap the back button, you'll have to press the ignore tab more than a hundred times again. I wish I was joking but something "steamy" happened at those ignored things. You have my condolences, fellow Android users....
Story is really good. Especially the CG in Chapter 7 on each paths if you know what i mean 😉😉 but.... except for Leandros' CG.... he kinda looks like Simba from the Lion King... 😶 he is sooo hot when he is out of his armor and stuff, and it's kinda a big turn off for his CG it's too far from the original character design..i just hope that in further chapters, his cg will change tho. The best so far is Ramos' cg. Dont get me wrong tho. I still love the story, can't wait for the next update! 😊😊😊
I love this game, and my favorite character is Koshiro. I can't really wait for the new update, and was sad to see his storyline end, and I am in fact a little depressed it did.
It has a great storyline, with great art, and awesome character writing.
I went in looking for something, and found a different thing that was greater than I ever could have imagined. I could not gather the words to tell you how much I love the story, and just the game in all.
Other than a few grammar mistakes here and there, it is very immersive, and is a quality game worth playing.
I wanted to like this. The art is great. But I just couldn't get over how much of a brat the MC is. I get he's a prince or whatever, but he reads as really immature to me. He also just seems kind of... dumb.... Well, maybe naive is a fairer word... Does the MC "grow up" as the story develops?
Yeah, he definitely gets better once he realizes he has... well, nothing except his Kingsguards. He quickly learns he isn't the center of the universe, in all the routes. He's the most bratty (for longer) with Ramos, I think so the rhino can tell him off.
He is like that is because of his Father and big part of it came from Leon/Leandros, the MC wanted to learn how to use sword but his father forbids it. Even Leon said it that the prince doesnt need to learn it because he would be the one to fight for him. To protect him. They didnt even want him to go outside of the Castle walls. Thats why he is a brat, if you analyzed it, it's not his fault for being that way. Even if his father is still alive all of his life he was abadoned and other turn their backs at him. But dont worry tho, I already did all of the paths, of the stories 🤣 and yeah he changed for the better of his people and kingdom. Well sometimes i get annoyed to Leon for being too protective instead of teaching the prince to protect himself. This is just my opinion tho. No hate 😊
I choose ignore, but it sounds like you're playing the Android version which, unless its been fixed, skips an entire section because of a background that's in the wrong format or something. If you can, I recommend using a computer instead.
yeah i ran into the same issue, i joined the discord and they said that they already knew about it and were trying to fix it. It was planned that it would be fixed this moth but it ended up being delayed
Oh, I'm really liking this!!! I pulled an all nighter just to finish Koshiros story which is by far my favorite and i regret nothing!!!
And speaking Koshiros route, i can't stress enough how much is like to see a hyosuke route in the future, (LIGHT SPOILERS AHEAD)
because despite what Koshiro said i can definitely see the similarities between hyosuke and the prince, altho more in the sense that they're foils to each other. It would be super interesting to see how a relationship between them would happen and if it would also help make hyosuke a better guy overall... Ugh, now I'm getting invested in that jerk of a wolf....
That aside, I'm absolutely hooked and can't wait for more! Although I dont think I'll be able to go for other routes easily considering what i know of Koshiro now ç-ç he's just so devoted I'm gonna cry....
If it's the Error screen youre talking about, just press ignore multiple times and it will go back to the story. I already finished my Koshiro's path. Just waiting for the next update tho. Lol.
oooh i did all of ramos' route that was available and it was amazing i cannot wait to see what else you have in store for him!! probably gonna try out leandros route next i like his dynamic, but i dont wanna cheat on my handsome rhino...
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Man I just finished koshiro's path and I already want a update of him!!!
Hope it comes in soon!
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Something about the story's narrative voice just bores me and I find that it doesn't become as immersive later on into the story. I don't think the problem inherently lies in the 2nd POV, but rather how the voice shows the details in the story. In short, there is A LOT of 'telling' than 'showing'.
I find the lack of actions in between pieces of dialogue troublesome... and blank-ish for the lack of a better word.
Katan as a protagonist... he seems to be quite dichotomic as a character, but I digress.
That doesn't necessarily mean that I don't like the VN. I'he had quite the enjoyable experienc for the most part.
Edit: Actually I find the characterization of Ramos to sometimes not really make sense. At some point, I recall Katan saying that he plans to pawn off the sword his uncle and aunt gave him for money, but when Ramos asked to sell it, he's hesitant all of a sudden.
I also find that he's quite ignorant for a prince. Somehow, he barely knows anything about Farhoron. Isn't he supposed to at least know more about it than stories because he is taught all these sorts of things, otherwise he wouldn't really be a good prince, would he?
There were also some character inconsistencies like when Ramos declined some stuff such as sleeping in Renee's old child's bed because he didn't want to be indebted. I found it weird because he was the same person who didn't hesitate to take the money and find the booze.
There were also some errors in grammar, sometimes. This becomes further evident later into the story. While they aren't to the point that the text no longer becomes understandable, I find them to be a bother to my pedantic self.
Is this game still being updated?
Do you mean as on itch.io or just in general because if it's itch then it is still being updated but it takes some time for the game to be updated because of how detailed it is.
Ah ok thanks!
yep! We're still goin!
I am so into the Koshiro path but was so disappointed when I couldn't run away with him. I really hope that I will he able to pick this option soon. I can't lie, you've made me fall for him.
You are doing a great job with this game it really got my attention I played all three parts just to get a feel of the ending. I like each and every character but my favorite is Ramos. Keep up the fantastic work!!
NOooo....It was a nice visual story, but I can't paid for 1.03 QAQ
It was a best visual story I ever play, so bad I only can play 1.02
anyone know what the update situation is? was really into in Koshiro's path.
No idea but I was really disappointed that you don't have any NSFW scene with Leandros. You have with Ramos and Koshiro but not him? And he got a full chapter of update :((((
I haven't played this game in years but Leandros did have one, I guess was removed when they got new artist for these current sprites, odd. their sex scenes was having sex with MC in a hut within some village I think, its been a while lol. their old character art when had the sex scene.
edit: forgot, they also had an even older sprite before this one. bulky like this one here but their face was very detailed more realistic looking lion head with piercing yellow eyes.
ngl this leandros scared me when it popped up out of nowhere
we're still going!
are we able to run away with koshiro now? :)
Not last I checked. :(
I got a bug in his house. That is only me?
Nope :(((((
sadly still not, we're working on Ramos's route for the next update
Is anyone else falling for Jaws, or is it just me? :3
Same but Im guessing he already have a lover at his island. So probabpy a big nope.
i definitely am falling for him hard.
lmao, I've heard that quite a bit now
are there any diffirent between public and patreon buid? or public is just an old version of the patreon.. i mean like CGs, plot, art or sth..?
check out the FAQ!
Is this NSFW
pretty much
What is our protag species?
human
Quando vai chegar a versão pública 1.03 leandros chapter 08
provavelmente em algum momento deste mês
Deu bug aqui na casa do raposo deu aí também. Depois fora da vila?
Will old saves work?
they may or may not, depending on where you saved
So has Leandros chapter 8 been updated or is going to update because ive downloaded it but it just goes to chapter 7
The Leandros chapter 8 is not public yet.
I SCREAMEDDD
YEEEEESSSSS!
I like this game and I hope you're doing well hope to see the next Update soon!
is the next update for all routes or just one route?
also: will jaws get a route one day/will he ever appear again or was that the only time he appears
Think it's just leandros route.
for this upcoming update, its Leandros
Hii there's a seemingly unskippable error when coming across Koshiro's old home. I've seen a few comments about this, but no official response, so I'm just commenting to raise awareness. Using the Android version, if that helps.
it will be fixed in the next update
Ah okay thank you <3
when will the next update be?
soon 😉
omg
how soon?
I know that you're probably busy but I don't know, after I reach koshiro's village the game crashes saying something like, " image not found"? I have been so hooked reading the route I tried many things like, re-downloading the game like 4 times in a row. I don't know :(
Someone help
When the error screen appears, just tap IGNORE button on lower left side of the screen. Click it many times until the next scene appears.
It's an Android picture type issue. Unfortunately that entire scene won't work on phones for now.
A pity just reached that now.
Same here. It touched ignore a dozen or half times.
Are you okay? Yore not sick are you
when Koshiro asks if you would flee with him is there a way to unlock the "flee with him" option? if so, how.
I believe not. The script does not show any logic for that. Seems to be WIP?
update when?
Next build will be a patreon one so it ownt be on itch for a long time and it's also not released on patreon yet. Hiddenwalls updates always take a while but are usually large and of great quallity. If you look at the past dev logs itch updates:
build 1.4 - september 2019
Next update - march 2020
Next update - january 2021
With covid, working a job and being in school there's just not alot of time to work on updates: https://www.patreon.com/posts/for-new-patreons-49134578
''It does not include Chapter 8 for Leandros, that will be in the next build and it will be a patreon build.''
https://www.patreon.com/posts/kingsguard-1-02-45806080
Will all the updates in patreon will be in itchio too??
yes
When is the next update and does this have a discord?
there is a discord link on the top when you open the page it should be a red colour. You will see Patreon and then a few lines down discord will be there.
What was Doran the bereaker's species
Lion
Can I ask one question? Pretty Please? Is there any NSFW scene in this game?
Yes. At least on Ramos route there is very explicit scenes.
I don't like much the Ramos one. The fox is kind funny.
Also Koshiro has a spicy part but its just him. The mc hides and watches
During koshiros route after you choose to leave the vimage on the Android version there is a massive exception I have hit ignore at least 30 times at this point and it's still occurring
Oh suffering!
Story is really good. Especially the CG in Chapter 7 on each paths if you know what i mean 😉😉 but.... except for Leandros' CG.... he kinda looks like Simba from the Lion King... 😶 he is sooo hot when he is out of his armor and stuff, and it's kinda a big turn off for his CG it's too far from the original character design..i just hope that in further chapters, his cg will change tho. The best so far is Ramos' cg. Dont get me wrong tho. I still love the story, can't wait for the next update! 😊😊😊
That's still an old CG from Leandro's old sprite.
I love this game, and my favorite character is Koshiro. I can't really wait for the new update, and was sad to see his storyline end, and I am in fact a little depressed it did.
It has a great storyline, with great art, and awesome character writing.
I went in looking for something, and found a different thing that was greater than I ever could have imagined. I could not gather the words to tell you how much I love the story, and just the game in all.
Other than a few grammar mistakes here and there, it is very immersive, and is a quality game worth playing.
I wanted to like this. The art is great. But I just couldn't get over how much of a brat the MC is. I get he's a prince or whatever, but he reads as really immature to me. He also just seems kind of... dumb.... Well, maybe naive is a fairer word... Does the MC "grow up" as the story develops?
He's forced to mature rapidly, but he's definitely a self-centered brat for the first few chapters. He's better after the ship.
the main character put me off, he was at times unbearable to read as. but ill pick it up again if he isn't always like this
Yeah, he definitely gets better once he realizes he has... well, nothing except his Kingsguards. He quickly learns he isn't the center of the universe, in all the routes. He's the most bratty (for longer) with Ramos, I think so the rhino can tell him off.
To me, he's most quickly humbled with Koshiro.
He is like that is because of his Father and big part of it came from Leon/Leandros, the MC wanted to learn how to use sword but his father forbids it. Even Leon said it that the prince doesnt need to learn it because he would be the one to fight for him. To protect him. They didnt even want him to go outside of the Castle walls. Thats why he is a brat, if you analyzed it, it's not his fault for being that way. Even if his father is still alive all of his life he was abadoned and other turn their backs at him. But dont worry tho, I already did all of the paths, of the stories 🤣 and yeah he changed for the better of his people and kingdom. Well sometimes i get annoyed to Leon for being too protective instead of teaching the prince to protect himself. This is just my opinion tho. No hate 😊
wish jaws was date-able tho :>
Will Escaping with Koshiro ever be a choice in his next updates or do i have to stay in the village
I'm sure it will be eventually. Try choosing to stay in the village, though, if you haven't already.
Am i finished when a file comes up saying copy code open ignore or quit or is that a bug?
I choose ignore, but it sounds like you're playing the Android version which, unless its been fixed, skips an entire section because of a background that's in the wrong format or something. If you can, I recommend using a computer instead.
Yh im on android so ignore doesnt work for me thanks for the recommendation
yeah i ran into the same issue, i joined the discord and they said that they already knew about it and were trying to fix it. It was planned that it would be fixed this moth but it ended up being delayed
Oh, I'm really liking this!!! I pulled an all nighter just to finish Koshiros story which is by far my favorite and i regret nothing!!!
And speaking Koshiros route, i can't stress enough how much is like to see a hyosuke route in the future, (LIGHT SPOILERS AHEAD)
because despite what Koshiro said i can definitely see the similarities between hyosuke and the prince, altho more in the sense that they're foils to each other. It would be super interesting to see how a relationship between them would happen and if it would also help make hyosuke a better guy overall... Ugh, now I'm getting invested in that jerk of a wolf....
That aside, I'm absolutely hooked and can't wait for more! Although I dont think I'll be able to go for other routes easily considering what i know of Koshiro now ç-ç he's just so devoted I'm gonna cry....
Same here a route with Koshiro and Hyosuke would be one of my wildest dreams coming true
wait theres a finish to koshiros route?? I ran into an issue and i couldnt play it anymore
If it's the Error screen youre talking about, just press ignore multiple times and it will go back to the story. I already finished my Koshiro's path. Just waiting for the next update tho. Lol.
Yeah, I just decided to get it on my pc and play it through that way
honestly, its way too slow for really unsatisfying pay offs.
best take
oooh i did all of ramos' route that was available and it was amazing i cannot wait to see what else you have in store for him!! probably gonna try out leandros route next i like his dynamic, but i dont wanna cheat on my handsome rhino...
sameee